Paper 2 period study – Narrative account: the Berlin Crisis, 1958–61
Write a narrative account analysing the key events of the Berlin Crisis in the years 1958–61.
You may use the following in your answer:
• Khrushchev's ultimatum (1958)
• the building of the Berlin Wall (1961)
You must also use information of your own.
[8 marks]
- AO1: show accurate, relevant knowledge of the key features of the period (4 marks)
- AO2: explain and analyse events using second-order concepts such as causation and consequence (4 marks)
- Events told in the right chronological order, from cause to outcome
- Explicit links between events ('this led to…', 'as a result…') – an analysed sequence, not a list
- Accurate specific detail: dates, names, numbers
- At least one event beyond the two prompts (needed for the top level)
- Staying inside the dates in the question
| Level | Marks | What it looks like |
|---|---|---|
| Level 3 | 6–8 | An analytical narrative that shows how events led to one another, organised in a clear, logical sequence. Knowledge is accurate and detailed and goes beyond the given prompts. |
| Level 2 | 3–5 | A narrative with some links between events, but parts are descriptive or the sequence is not always clear. Knowledge is mostly accurate but may be limited to the prompts. |
| Level 1 | 1–2 | A simple or general account with few links between events and basic knowledge. |
| No marks | 0 | Nothing worthy of credit. |
- Beginning: why Berlin was a problem – refugees – leading to the 1958 ultimatum
- Middle 1: talks – Geneva 1959, Camp David 1959 – tension falls
- Middle 2: breakdown – U-2 and Paris 1960, Vienna 1961 – refugees surge
- End: the Wall (August 1961), Checkpoint Charlie (October 1961) – how the Wall ended the crisis
Show the top-band model answer
The Berlin Crisis began because1 West Berlin had become a serious problem for the Soviet Union and East Germany. Since 1949 around three million East Germans had left for the West2, most of them crossing into West Berlin, and many were skilled young workers such as doctors and engineers. This drain of people damaged the East German economy and was an embarrassment for communism. As a result, in November 1958 Khrushchev issued an ultimatum: the USA, Britain and France had six months to withdraw their troops from West Berlin, which would become a 'free city'. This turned a local problem into a direct confrontation3 between the superpowers.
At first the crisis was handled through talks. The Western powers refused to leave Berlin, but they agreed to discuss its future, and foreign ministers met at Geneva in 1959. Although no agreement was reached, the six-month deadline passed quietly, and in September 1959 Khrushchev visited the USA and met Eisenhower at Camp David4. This lowered tension, because the two leaders agreed to hold a full summit in Paris in 1960.
However, the summits then broke down, which made the crisis worse5. On 1 May 1960 an American U-2 spy plane was shot down over the USSR and its pilot, Gary Powers, was captured. Eisenhower refused to apologise, so Khrushchev walked out of the Paris summit that May. At the Vienna summit in June 1961 Khrushchev saw the new president, Kennedy, as young and inexperienced and repeated his threat to sign a separate peace treaty with East Germany, which would end Western rights in Berlin. Kennedy responded by increasing US defence spending. Because neither side would back down, the number of refugees rose sharply, reaching about 2,000 a day by the summer of 1961.
This led directly to the building of the Berlin Wall6. On the night of 12–13 August 1961 East German soldiers sealed the border between East and West Berlin with barbed wire, which was soon replaced by a concrete wall with guard posts. Tension peaked in October 1961, when US and Soviet tanks faced each other at Checkpoint Charlie for around sixteen hours before both sides withdrew. The Wall ended the crisis because7 it stopped the flow of refugees without forcing the West out of Berlin, and Kennedy accepted it, reportedly remarking that a wall was a lot better than a war.
- Writing a list of unconnected facts with no links between them
- Explaining why the Wall was built in detail (a 'why' essay) instead of telling the sequence of events
- Running outside the dates – e.g. writing about the 1948–49 Berlin Blockade or Kennedy's 1963 visit at length
- Only covering the two prompts, which caps the mark
- Confusing the 1958 ultimatum with the 1948 Blockade, or the U-2 incident (1960) with the Cuban Missile Crisis (1962)