Paper 2 British depth study (b) – Explain why William won the Battle of Hastings
Explain why William of Normandy won the Battle of Hastings in 1066.
You may use the following in your answer:
• Harold's march south from Stamford Bridge
• the Norman cavalry
You must also use information of your own.
[12 marks]
- AO1: show accurate, relevant knowledge of the key features of the period (6 marks)
- AO2: explain and analyse causation – why something happened (6 marks)
- Three clearly separate reasons, each in its own paragraph that starts with the reason
- Precise supporting detail: dates, places, numbers, named people
- An explicit link from each reason to the outcome ('this meant that…', 'so William was able to…')
- At least one reason that is NOT one of the two prompts – required for Level 4
- Optional but powerful: showing how reasons connected (e.g. bad luck for Harold made Norman tactics more effective)
| Level | Marks | What it looks like |
|---|---|---|
| Level 4 | 10–12 | A clear, analytical explanation of several reasons, each developed with precise, accurate knowledge and directly linked to the question. Must cover at least three aspects of content, so information beyond the two prompts is needed. Reasons may be connected or prioritised. |
| Level 3 | 7–9 | Explains reasons with mostly accurate and relevant knowledge; the line of reasoning is generally clear but may be uneven. An answer that does not cover at least three aspects of content (i.e. only the two prompts) is capped at 8 marks. |
| Level 2 | 4–6 | Some explanation, but answers drift into description or the links to 'why' are not made clear. Knowledge is accurate in places but thin. |
| Level 1 | 1–3 | Simple or general statements with little supporting knowledge. |
| No marks | 0 | Nothing worthy of credit. |
- Reason 1 (prompt): Harold's exhausted, depleted army after Fulford and Stamford Bridge; rushed to fight without waiting for full forces
- Reason 2 (prompt): Norman cavalry and the feigned retreats that broke the shield wall
- Reason 3 (own): William's preparation and luck – papal banner, fleet, wind, landing unopposed at Pevensey while the fyrd had disbanded
- Optional linking sentence: the reasons combined – Harold's position made Norman tactics decisive
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One reason William won was that1 Harold's army was weakened and tired by having to fight on two fronts. In September 1066 Harald Hardrada and Tostig invaded the north, defeating the northern earls Edwin and Morcar at Fulford on 20 September2. Harold marched north and won a great victory at Stamford Bridge on 25 September, but lost many of his best housecarls. Only three days later, on 28 September, William landed at Pevensey on the south coast. Harold marched his army around 200 miles back south and chose to fight on 14 October rather than wait in London for more troops to gather. This meant that many of Harold's soldiers were exhausted3, and his army included poorly armed men from the fyrd rather than a full force of trained warriors, which made it harder to hold out for a full day's fighting.
A second reason was William's use of cavalry and tactics. The English fought on foot in a shield wall along the top of Senlac Ridge, which at first was very strong: Norman archers and charges up the slope failed to break it. However, William's mounted knights could move quickly and turn to attack. When part of William's army fled and a rumour spread that William had been killed, he lifted his helmet to show he was alive, and his cavalry cut down the English soldiers who had broken ranks to chase them. The Normans then used this deliberately with feigned retreats4, luring more men out of the shield wall and killing them on the open ground. This mattered because, once the shield wall thinned, the English could no longer keep out the combined attacks of archers, infantry and cavalry.
A third reason was William's careful preparation and good fortune5. He had won the support of Pope Alexander II, who sent a papal banner, which made the invasion look like a holy cause and helped him recruit knights from across France. He also built a large fleet and gathered supplies in Normandy. Unfavourable winds kept his ships in port through the summer, but this delay turned out to be lucky: Harold had kept the fyrd guarding the south coast all summer, but had to send it home on 8 September because its supplies had run out and the harvest needed gathering. As a result, William landed without any opposition and had two weeks to build a castle at Hastings and rest his troops before the battle.
These reasons were linked6. William's preparation and luck allowed him to land safely, Harold's rush south meant he fought with a tired and incomplete army, and this made the Norman tactics of cavalry charges and feigned retreats much more effective. The death of Harold and his brothers Gyrth and Leofwine during the battle left the English with no leader, and their army collapsed.
- Telling the story of 1066 from Edward's death onwards instead of explaining reasons
- Only writing about the two prompts – this caps the answer at 8 marks (no Level 4)
- Getting the order of battles wrong (Fulford 20 Sept, Stamford Bridge 25 Sept, Hastings 14 Oct)
- Writing a 'how far' judgement or a long conclusion – a 12-mark 'explain why' question does not need one
- Vague claims such as 'the Normans had better weapons' without explaining how or why
- Saying Harold was killed by an arrow in the eye as definite fact – the Bayeux Tapestry is ambiguous; avoid relying on it