9 + 3 marks – do earthquake effects depend more on development than on strength?
'The effects of an earthquake depend more on the level of development of the country affected than on the strength of the earthquake.'
Using examples, to what extent do you agree with this statement? [9 marks] [+3 SPaG marks]
- AO1: show knowledge of named places, environments and processes
- AO2: show understanding of how and why things happen, and how factors interact
- AO3: apply that knowledge to analyse, evaluate and reach a supported judgement
- Two named earthquakes in contrasting countries (e.g. an HIC and an LIC), with specific primary and secondary effects
- Explaining WHY development changes effects: building standards, emergency response, healthcare, money for recovery
- Recognising the other side: magnitude, depth, location, population density, time of day and secondary hazards
- Separating different kinds of effect – deaths may fall with development while economic losses rise
- A conclusion that answers 'more than' directly
| Level | Marks | What it looks like |
|---|---|---|
| Level 3 (Detailed) | 7–9 | Accurate, detailed knowledge of named places and processes is used purposefully. Explanation is thorough and linked back to the question. Evaluation weighs both sides and reaches a clear, justified conclusion about 'how far'. |
| Level 2 (Clear) | 4–6 | Relevant knowledge with some specific place detail. Explanation is clear but may be uneven. Some evaluation, but the conclusion may be asserted rather than fully supported. |
| Level 1 (Basic) | 1–3 | Generic or partly accurate knowledge with little place detail. Points are mostly descriptive, with little or no evaluation or judgement. |
| SPaG | 0–3 | 3 = spelling, punctuation and grammar consistently accurate, with precise subject terms used throughout; 2 = generally accurate with a good range of subject terms; 1 = reasonable accuracy with some subject terms; 0 = errors seriously hinder meaning or nothing relevant written. |
- Intro-free start: contrast Chile 2010 (8.8, ~525 deaths) with Nepal 2015 (7.8, ~9,000 deaths)
- Explain how development reduced Chile's death toll and raised Nepal's
- Twist: economic losses – larger in Chile in dollars, far larger for Nepal relative to its economy
- Counter-argument: depth, location, timing and secondary hazards also mattered
- Judgement: agree to a large extent – development decides vulnerability, strength decides the size of the threat
Show the top-band model answer
The contrast between two well-known earthquakes strongly supports the statement. On 27 February 2010 an earthquake of magnitude 8.8 struck off the coast of central Chile, one of the most powerful ever recorded, yet around 525 people died1. On 25 April 2015 a magnitude 7.8 earthquake struck Nepal, releasing roughly 30 times less energy2, but nearly 9,000 people were killed. The weaker earthquake killed about 17 times as many people, which suggests that the country's level of development mattered more than the strength of the shaking.
Development explains much of this difference because it controls how vulnerable people are. Chile is a relatively wealthy country with a long history of earthquakes, including the 1960 Valdivia earthquake, the strongest ever recorded, so it has strict building codes that are enforced3. Most modern buildings flexed rather than collapsed, so primary effects such as deaths from collapsing buildings were limited. Chile's well-funded emergency services also responded quickly. In contrast, Nepal was a low-income country where many homes were built from unreinforced brick and stone, and building rules were poorly enforced, so hundreds of thousands of houses were destroyed and people were crushed inside them. Nepal's mountainous terrain and limited road network meant that landslides cut off villages, so rescue teams and aid took days to arrive4 and injured people went without treatment, increasing secondary effects.
However, development does not reduce every effect5. Chile's damage was estimated at up to around 30 billion US dollars, far more than Nepal's (around 7 billion US dollars) in absolute terms, because a richer country has more valuable buildings, roads and ports to lose. The real difference is in the ability to cope: Chile could afford to rebuild quickly, whereas Nepal's losses were equivalent to around a third of its annual GDP, so recovery was slow and depended heavily on international aid.
Other factors also shaped the effects, so the strength of the earthquake and its physical context still matter. Nepal's earthquake was shallow and its epicentre was on land, about 80 km from the capital Kathmandu, whereas Chile's epicentre was offshore. Secondary hazards also depend on physical geography: Chile's coast was hit by a tsunami, while in Nepal the earthquake triggered landslides and an avalanche at Everest Base Camp. Timing played a part too6: Nepal's earthquake happened around midday on a Saturday, the weekly day off, so schools were empty, which probably prevented many child deaths.
Overall, I agree with the statement to a large extent7. Strength, depth and location decide the size of the hazard, but the level of development decides how many people are harmed by it. A magnitude 8.8 earthquake in Chile killed far fewer people than a 7.8 in Nepal, which shows that development is the more important factor for human effects, even though wealthier countries may suffer larger economic losses in absolute terms.
- Describing the two earthquakes one after the other without ever comparing them
- Saying LICs 'don't care' or 'are poor' without explaining the mechanism (building quality, response, healthcare)
- Mixing up primary effects (caused directly by shaking) and secondary effects (caused later, e.g. landslides, disease, loss of income)
- Ignoring the strength part of the statement, so there is no evaluation
- Inaccurate case-study figures – it is better to round (e.g. 'nearly 9,000') than to invent precise numbers