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The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde

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30 marks · About 50 minutes (5 planning, 45 writing)

Jekyll and Hyde – Hyde as a violent, frightening figure (Carew murder extract)

Read the following extract from Chapter 4 (‘The Carew Murder Case’) of The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde and then answer the question that follows.

In this extract a maid, looking out of her window late at night, witnesses a meeting in the lane below.

And as she so sat she became aware of an aged and beautiful gentleman with white hair, drawing near along the lane; and advancing to meet him, another and very small gentleman, to whom at first she paid less attention. […] He had in his hand a heavy cane, with which he was trifling; but he answered never a word, and seemed to listen with an ill-contained impatience. And then all of a sudden he broke out in a great flame of anger, stamping with his foot, brandishing the cane, and carrying on (as the maid described it) like a madman. The old gentleman took a step back, with the air of one very much surprised and a trifle hurt; and at that Mr. Hyde broke out of all bounds and clubbed him to the earth. And next moment, with ape-like fury, he was trampling his victim under foot and hailing down a storm of blows, under which the bones were audibly shattered and the body jumped upon the roadway. At the horror of these sights and sounds, the maid fainted.

Starting with this extract, explore how Stevenson presents Mr Hyde as a violent and frightening figure.

Write about:

  • how Stevenson presents Hyde in this extract
  • how Stevenson presents Hyde in the novel as a whole.

[30 marks]

What is being assessed
  • AO1: build a personal, critical argument about the text and support it with well-chosen quotations or references
  • AO2: analyse how the writer uses language, form and structure to create meanings and effects, using terminology where it helps
  • AO3: show how the text's contexts (when it was written and set, and how it was received) shape its meanings
What examiners reward
  • An argument that connects the focus (Hyde/setting) to the novel's big ideas about duality and respectability
  • Close analysis of the extract, including narrative structure and viewpoint
  • Precise references from across the novella, including the final chapters
  • Context (Darwin, degeneration, Victorian respectability, Gothic, Edinburgh/London) used to explain meaning
  • Embedded, accurate quotations
LevelMarksWhat it looks like
Level 626–30A perceptive, original argument shaped by a clear overarching idea; quotations or references chosen with precision and woven into sentences; close, convincing analysis of how language, form and structure build meaning, with terminology used only where it sharpens the point; context folded into the argument rather than bolted on.
Level 521–25A considered, well-developed response; well-chosen references integrated into the argument; examines the writer's methods and their effects in some depth; context used thoughtfully to deepen interpretation.
Level 416–20A clear, sustained answer that keeps to the question; relevant references used effectively; methods clearly explained with appropriate terminology; context clearly understood and linked to the task.
Level 311–15Explains ideas with some development; references support points; some explanation of the writer's choices; some relevant understanding of context.
Level 26–10Relevant comments backed by some references; identifies some methods, mostly by naming them; some awareness of context or ideas.
Level 11–5Simple, mostly narrative comments; occasional references; a basic awareness that the writer has made choices; simple mention of context.
How to plan it
  1. Concept: violence that is sudden, pointless and pleasurable – and comes from inside Jekyll.
  2. Extract: contrast ‘aged and beautiful’ vs ‘very small gentleman’ – irony of ‘gentleman’.
  3. Extract: sudden shift, ‘flame of anger’, participles; second-hand testimony.
  4. Extract: ‘ape-like fury’ – Darwin and degeneration; ‘audibly shattered’.
  5. Whole: Ch 1 ‘Juggernaut’; ‘Satan's signature’; ‘troglodytic’; Poole's ‘monkey’.
  6. Ch 10: ‘truly two’, ‘devil… came out roaring’ – Hyde is Jekyll's repressed self.
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Stevenson presents Hyde as frightening not only because he is violent but because his violence is sudden, pointless and pleasurable1 – it erupts from nowhere and seems to belong to something pre-human. Yet the novel's final revelation is more disturbing still: Hyde is not an outsider at all, but a part of the respectable Dr Jekyll, and so a part of the Victorian gentleman.

The extract builds horror through contrast. The victim is ‘aged and beautiful’ with ‘white hair’, connotations of innocence, dignity and even holiness, while Hyde is introduced only as ‘another and very small gentleman’. His smallness is significant2: across the novel Hyde is described as stunted, which suggests that the evil side of Jekyll has been less exercised and so is less developed. Calling him a ‘gentleman’ is ironic, since his behaviour destroys every gentlemanly code, but it also hints at the truth that he is literally a gentleman in disguise.

Stevenson then shows violence erupting from almost nothing. Hyde ‘answered never a word’ and listened with ‘ill-contained impatience’, and the phrase ‘all of a sudden’ marks a shift in pace. The metaphor ‘a great flame of anger’ and the string of present participles – ‘stamping’, ‘brandishing’, ‘carrying on’ – create a frantic rhythm. The parenthesis ‘(as the maid described it)’3 reminds us that we are receiving the scene second-hand: like much of the novel, Hyde's evil is filtered through witnesses, which keeps him mysterious and makes the reader piece together the truth, as Utterson must.

The most frightening language is animalistic. Hyde attacks ‘with ape-like fury’, a simile that would have alarmed readers in 1886, a generation after Darwin's4 On the Origin of Species (1859). Many Victorians feared ‘degeneration’ – the idea that humans might slide back towards a more primitive state – and Hyde embodies that fear. The verbs ‘clubbed’ and ‘trampling’ are brutally physical, and the metaphor ‘hailing down a storm of blows’ turns him into a natural force with no conscience. The auditory detail that the bones were ‘audibly shattered’ and the grotesque image of the body that ‘jumped upon the roadway’ give the scene a horrifying realism, before the maid's fainting provides a final reaction for the reader to share.

This scene escalates the novel's first act of violence. In Chapter 1 Enfield describes Hyde trampling a young girl ‘like some damned Juggernaut’, an image of an unstoppable machine. There the violence was cold; here it is frenzied, showing that Hyde is growing stronger. The repetition of trampling links the two attacks5 and suggests a pattern rather than an accident.

Throughout the novel, Hyde also frightens because he cannot be defined. Everyone who sees him feels a deformity they cannot name, and Utterson declares that if he ever read ‘Satan's signature upon a face’, it is on Hyde's. He is called ‘troglodytic’, linking him again to primitive cave-dwellers. Poole describes him jumping ‘like a monkey’ in Chapter 8. These shifting descriptions turn Hyde into a mirror for each character's fears.

The final chapter reveals the source of this violence. In ‘Henry Jekyll's Full Statement of the Case’ Jekyll admits that ‘man is not truly one, but truly two’6 and that, after a period of self-restraint, ‘my devil had been long caged, he came out roaring’. He confesses that he felt ‘glee’ while beating Carew. The violence of the extract is therefore Jekyll's own repressed desire, released by a respectable man who hid his pleasures behind the strict codes of Victorian society. Stevenson's real horror is not a monster from outside, but the suggestion that a Hyde lives inside every outwardly respectable gentleman.

1. A three-part concept that the essay then proves step by step (AO1).
2. Picks out a detail many students skip and links it to the novel's explanation of Hyde – perceptive AO2.
3. Analyses narrative structure (second-hand testimony) – an often-missed method in this novel.
4. Accurate context (1859/1886) linked to the ‘ape-like’ simile rather than stated separately (AO3).
5. Connects extract to Chapter 1 to show escalation – whole-text knowledge used analytically.
6. Uses the final revelation to reframe the extract – the conclusion develops the argument rather than repeating it.
Where marks are usually lost
  • Describing Hyde's crimes in order without analysing Stevenson's language.
  • Calling Hyde simply ‘evil’ without exploring why he is frightening (mystery, animal imagery, indescribability).
  • Forgetting the twist: an answer that never mentions Jekyll misses the novel's main point about Hyde.
  • Dropping in ‘Darwin's theory of evolution’ with no link to a quotation.
  • Assuming the narrator is objective – the novel is built from witnesses and documents.
30 marks · About 50 minutes (5 planning, 45 writing)

Jekyll and Hyde – setting, mystery and threat (Soho fog extract)

Read the following extract from Chapter 4 (‘The Carew Murder Case’) of The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde and then answer the question that follows.

In this extract Mr Utterson travels by cab with a police inspector to Mr Hyde's house in Soho.

It was by this time about nine in the morning, and the first fog of the season. A great chocolate-coloured pall lowered over heaven, but the wind was continually charging and routing these embattled vapours; so that as the cab crawled from street to street, Mr. Utterson beheld a marvellous number of degrees and hues of twilight; for here it would be dark like the back-end of evening; and there would be a glow of a rich, lurid brown, like the light of some strange conflagration; and here, for a moment, the fog would be quite broken up, and a haggard shaft of daylight would glance in between the swirling wreaths. The dismal quarter of Soho seen under these changing glimpses, with its muddy ways, and slatternly passengers, and its lamps, which had never been extinguished or had been kindled afresh to combat this mournful reinvasion of darkness, seemed, in the lawyer's eyes, like a district of some city in a nightmare. […]

As the cab drew up before the address indicated, the fog lifted a little and showed him a dingy street, a gin palace, a low French eating house, a shop for the retail of penny numbers and twopenny salads, many ragged children huddled in the doorways, and many women of many different nationalities passing out, key in hand, to have a morning glass; and the next moment the fog settled down again upon that part, as brown as umber, and cut him off from his blackguardly surroundings.

Starting with this extract, explore how Stevenson uses settings to create a sense of mystery and threat.

Write about:

  • how Stevenson uses setting in this extract
  • how Stevenson uses settings in the novel as a whole.

[30 marks]

What is being assessed
  • AO1: build a personal, critical argument about the text and support it with well-chosen quotations or references
  • AO2: analyse how the writer uses language, form and structure to create meanings and effects, using terminology where it helps
  • AO3: show how the text's contexts (when it was written and set, and how it was received) shape its meanings
What examiners reward
  • An argument that connects the focus (Hyde/setting) to the novel's big ideas about duality and respectability
  • Close analysis of the extract, including narrative structure and viewpoint
  • Precise references from across the novella, including the final chapters
  • Context (Darwin, degeneration, Victorian respectability, Gothic, Edinburgh/London) used to explain meaning
  • Embedded, accurate quotations
LevelMarksWhat it looks like
Level 626–30A perceptive, original argument shaped by a clear overarching idea; quotations or references chosen with precision and woven into sentences; close, convincing analysis of how language, form and structure build meaning, with terminology used only where it sharpens the point; context folded into the argument rather than bolted on.
Level 521–25A considered, well-developed response; well-chosen references integrated into the argument; examines the writer's methods and their effects in some depth; context used thoughtfully to deepen interpretation.
Level 416–20A clear, sustained answer that keeps to the question; relevant references used effectively; methods clearly explained with appropriate terminology; context clearly understood and linked to the task.
Level 311–15Explains ideas with some development; references support points; some explanation of the writer's choices; some relevant understanding of context.
Level 26–10Relevant comments backed by some references; identifies some methods, mostly by naming them; some awareness of context or ideas.
Level 11–5Simple, mostly narrative comments; occasional references; a basic awareness that the writer has made choices; simple mention of context.
How to plan it
  1. Concept: London hides darkness behind respectable fronts and fog – setting mirrors Jekyll.
  2. Extract: ‘chocolate-coloured pall’, military metaphors, cab ‘crawled’.
  3. Extract: shifting light, ‘lurid’, ‘haggard shaft’, sentence structure of glimpses.
  4. Extract: Soho as ‘city in a nightmare’; list of poverty through Utterson's eyes; fog ‘cut him off’.
  5. Whole: Ch 1 street vs ‘sinister block’ – door is Jekyll's; house with two faces; Edinburgh.
  6. Ch 8: ‘moon… tilted’ – world off balance.
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Stevenson's London is not a neutral backdrop but an extension of the novel's central idea1: just as Jekyll hides Hyde, the city hides its darkness behind respectable fronts and a shifting screen of fog. Settings in the novel are deliberately divided and obscured, so that the reader, like Utterson, can never see clearly.

The fog in this extract is presented as an active, hostile force. The ‘chocolate-coloured pall’ that ‘lowered over heaven’ is funereal – a pall covers a coffin2 – and it blocks out the sky, suggesting a world cut off from God or moral clarity. Military metaphors3 (‘charging and routing these embattled vapours’) turn the weather into a battlefield, mirroring the war between good and evil inside Jekyll. Even the cab ‘crawled’, a verb that makes progress towards the truth slow and uncertain.

Stevenson repeatedly uses images of shifting light. Utterson sees ‘a marvellous number of degrees and hues of twilight’; it is morning, yet it looks ‘like the back-end of evening’. Time itself seems confused. The simile ‘like the light of some strange conflagration’ suggests fire and destruction, and the adjective ‘lurid’ carries connotations of both glaring colour and sensational, shocking events – exactly the kind of crime the investigation concerns. When a ‘haggard shaft of daylight’ breaks through, even daylight is personified as exhausted and sickly. The structure of the long sentence4, broken by semicolons and the repeated ‘here… there… here’, imitates the flickering, fragmentary glimpses that are all anyone gets of Hyde.

The description of Soho suggests that Hyde's home matches his nature. The ‘mournful reinvasion of darkness’ personifies night as an invader, and the climax of the sentence – ‘like a district of some city in a nightmare’ – moves the setting from realism into Gothic dreamscape, reminding us that Utterson has already dreamed of Hyde moving through a city of lamps. The second paragraph's list (‘a gin palace, a low French eating house… many ragged children huddled in the doorways’) reflects respectable Victorian anxieties about poverty, drink and foreignness in parts of London. Stevenson presents these through Utterson's prejudiced eyes5: the word ‘blackguardly’ is the lawyer's judgement. The fog then ‘settled down again’ and ‘cut him off’, so the revelation is immediately withdrawn: the truth can be glimpsed but not held.

Across the novel, settings are divided in the same way as Jekyll himself. In Chapter 1 the by-street ‘shone out in contrast to its dingy neighbourhood, like a fire in a forest’, but its smart shop fronts are interrupted by ‘a certain sinister block of building’ with no windows, only ‘a blind forehead of discoloured wall’ and a door ‘blistered and distained’. The personification of the building as a blind face, scarred and neglected, prepares us for Hyde. The twist is that this door belongs to Jekyll's own house: its back entrance leads to his laboratory, while the front, on a square of handsome old houses, has an ‘air of wealth and comfort’. One building with two faces6 is the clearest symbol of the novel's duality.

This divided geography may draw on Stevenson's Edinburgh, a city split between the elegant New Town and the crowded Old Town, and it reflects the double lives that Victorian respectability encouraged. Interior settings deepen the threat: Jekyll's cabinet, reached through a former dissecting theatre, links him to the dangers of science that tampers with the body.

Finally, in ‘The Last Night’, Stevenson uses weather to build suspense: it is ‘a wild, cold, seasonable night of March’ with a pale moon ‘lying on her back as though the wind had tilted her’. The image of a toppled moon suggests a world knocked off balance. Throughout, then, setting does more than create atmosphere: it embodies the idea that respectable surfaces conceal darkness, and that the truth, like Soho in the fog, is only ever half seen.

1. Concept links setting to the novel's theme of duality, so analysis of setting never becomes mere description (AO1).
2. Precise connotation that explains the mood – detailed AO2.
3. Identifies a pattern of imagery and links it to the conflict inside Jekyll.
4. Sentence-level structure analysed for its effect – a method many answers miss.
5. Critical awareness of viewpoint and Victorian attitudes – sophisticated AO3 that avoids simply repeating the narrator's judgement.
6. Memorable, conceptual point that ties the whole-text setting back to the argument.
Where marks are usually lost
  • Writing only about fog – the question asks about settings across the novel.
  • Listing ‘pathetic fallacy’ everywhere without explaining what the weather reveals about character or theme.
  • Missing the significance of the door being part of Jekyll's house.
  • Accepting Utterson's view of Soho uncritically.
  • Running out of time before covering the later chapters (‘The Last Night’).

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