Jekyll and Hyde – Hyde as a violent, frightening figure (Carew murder extract)
Read the following extract from Chapter 4 (‘The Carew Murder Case’) of The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde and then answer the question that follows.
In this extract a maid, looking out of her window late at night, witnesses a meeting in the lane below.
And as she so sat she became aware of an aged and beautiful gentleman with white hair, drawing near along the lane; and advancing to meet him, another and very small gentleman, to whom at first she paid less attention. […] He had in his hand a heavy cane, with which he was trifling; but he answered never a word, and seemed to listen with an ill-contained impatience. And then all of a sudden he broke out in a great flame of anger, stamping with his foot, brandishing the cane, and carrying on (as the maid described it) like a madman. The old gentleman took a step back, with the air of one very much surprised and a trifle hurt; and at that Mr. Hyde broke out of all bounds and clubbed him to the earth. And next moment, with ape-like fury, he was trampling his victim under foot and hailing down a storm of blows, under which the bones were audibly shattered and the body jumped upon the roadway. At the horror of these sights and sounds, the maid fainted.
Starting with this extract, explore how Stevenson presents Mr Hyde as a violent and frightening figure.
Write about:
- how Stevenson presents Hyde in this extract
- how Stevenson presents Hyde in the novel as a whole.
[30 marks]
- AO1: build a personal, critical argument about the text and support it with well-chosen quotations or references
- AO2: analyse how the writer uses language, form and structure to create meanings and effects, using terminology where it helps
- AO3: show how the text's contexts (when it was written and set, and how it was received) shape its meanings
- An argument that connects the focus (Hyde/setting) to the novel's big ideas about duality and respectability
- Close analysis of the extract, including narrative structure and viewpoint
- Precise references from across the novella, including the final chapters
- Context (Darwin, degeneration, Victorian respectability, Gothic, Edinburgh/London) used to explain meaning
- Embedded, accurate quotations
| Level | Marks | What it looks like |
|---|---|---|
| Level 6 | 26–30 | A perceptive, original argument shaped by a clear overarching idea; quotations or references chosen with precision and woven into sentences; close, convincing analysis of how language, form and structure build meaning, with terminology used only where it sharpens the point; context folded into the argument rather than bolted on. |
| Level 5 | 21–25 | A considered, well-developed response; well-chosen references integrated into the argument; examines the writer's methods and their effects in some depth; context used thoughtfully to deepen interpretation. |
| Level 4 | 16–20 | A clear, sustained answer that keeps to the question; relevant references used effectively; methods clearly explained with appropriate terminology; context clearly understood and linked to the task. |
| Level 3 | 11–15 | Explains ideas with some development; references support points; some explanation of the writer's choices; some relevant understanding of context. |
| Level 2 | 6–10 | Relevant comments backed by some references; identifies some methods, mostly by naming them; some awareness of context or ideas. |
| Level 1 | 1–5 | Simple, mostly narrative comments; occasional references; a basic awareness that the writer has made choices; simple mention of context. |
- Concept: violence that is sudden, pointless and pleasurable – and comes from inside Jekyll.
- Extract: contrast ‘aged and beautiful’ vs ‘very small gentleman’ – irony of ‘gentleman’.
- Extract: sudden shift, ‘flame of anger’, participles; second-hand testimony.
- Extract: ‘ape-like fury’ – Darwin and degeneration; ‘audibly shattered’.
- Whole: Ch 1 ‘Juggernaut’; ‘Satan's signature’; ‘troglodytic’; Poole's ‘monkey’.
- Ch 10: ‘truly two’, ‘devil… came out roaring’ – Hyde is Jekyll's repressed self.
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Stevenson presents Hyde as frightening not only because he is violent but because his violence is sudden, pointless and pleasurable1 – it erupts from nowhere and seems to belong to something pre-human. Yet the novel's final revelation is more disturbing still: Hyde is not an outsider at all, but a part of the respectable Dr Jekyll, and so a part of the Victorian gentleman.
The extract builds horror through contrast. The victim is ‘aged and beautiful’ with ‘white hair’, connotations of innocence, dignity and even holiness, while Hyde is introduced only as ‘another and very small gentleman’. His smallness is significant2: across the novel Hyde is described as stunted, which suggests that the evil side of Jekyll has been less exercised and so is less developed. Calling him a ‘gentleman’ is ironic, since his behaviour destroys every gentlemanly code, but it also hints at the truth that he is literally a gentleman in disguise.
Stevenson then shows violence erupting from almost nothing. Hyde ‘answered never a word’ and listened with ‘ill-contained impatience’, and the phrase ‘all of a sudden’ marks a shift in pace. The metaphor ‘a great flame of anger’ and the string of present participles – ‘stamping’, ‘brandishing’, ‘carrying on’ – create a frantic rhythm. The parenthesis ‘(as the maid described it)’3 reminds us that we are receiving the scene second-hand: like much of the novel, Hyde's evil is filtered through witnesses, which keeps him mysterious and makes the reader piece together the truth, as Utterson must.
The most frightening language is animalistic. Hyde attacks ‘with ape-like fury’, a simile that would have alarmed readers in 1886, a generation after Darwin's4 On the Origin of Species (1859). Many Victorians feared ‘degeneration’ – the idea that humans might slide back towards a more primitive state – and Hyde embodies that fear. The verbs ‘clubbed’ and ‘trampling’ are brutally physical, and the metaphor ‘hailing down a storm of blows’ turns him into a natural force with no conscience. The auditory detail that the bones were ‘audibly shattered’ and the grotesque image of the body that ‘jumped upon the roadway’ give the scene a horrifying realism, before the maid's fainting provides a final reaction for the reader to share.
This scene escalates the novel's first act of violence. In Chapter 1 Enfield describes Hyde trampling a young girl ‘like some damned Juggernaut’, an image of an unstoppable machine. There the violence was cold; here it is frenzied, showing that Hyde is growing stronger. The repetition of trampling links the two attacks5 and suggests a pattern rather than an accident.
Throughout the novel, Hyde also frightens because he cannot be defined. Everyone who sees him feels a deformity they cannot name, and Utterson declares that if he ever read ‘Satan's signature upon a face’, it is on Hyde's. He is called ‘troglodytic’, linking him again to primitive cave-dwellers. Poole describes him jumping ‘like a monkey’ in Chapter 8. These shifting descriptions turn Hyde into a mirror for each character's fears.
The final chapter reveals the source of this violence. In ‘Henry Jekyll's Full Statement of the Case’ Jekyll admits that ‘man is not truly one, but truly two’6 and that, after a period of self-restraint, ‘my devil had been long caged, he came out roaring’. He confesses that he felt ‘glee’ while beating Carew. The violence of the extract is therefore Jekyll's own repressed desire, released by a respectable man who hid his pleasures behind the strict codes of Victorian society. Stevenson's real horror is not a monster from outside, but the suggestion that a Hyde lives inside every outwardly respectable gentleman.
- Describing Hyde's crimes in order without analysing Stevenson's language.
- Calling Hyde simply ‘evil’ without exploring why he is frightening (mystery, animal imagery, indescribability).
- Forgetting the twist: an answer that never mentions Jekyll misses the novel's main point about Hyde.
- Dropping in ‘Darwin's theory of evolution’ with no link to a quotation.
- Assuming the narrator is objective – the novel is built from witnesses and documents.