An Inspector Calls – responsibility
Answer the following question on An Inspector Calls.
How does Priestley use the play to explore ideas about responsibility?
Write about:
- the ideas about responsibility that Priestley presents
- the methods Priestley uses to present these ideas.
[30 marks]
AO4 [4 marks]
Note: this is a modern copyrighted text, so this guide refers to moments in the play in its own words rather than quoting. In the exam you should use short, accurate quotations.
- AO1: build a personal, critical argument about the text and support it with well-chosen quotations or references
- AO2: analyse how the writer uses language, form and structure to create meanings and effects, using terminology where it helps
- AO3: show how the text's contexts (when it was written and set, and how it was received) shape its meanings
- AO4: spell, punctuate and use vocabulary and sentence structures accurately and with range (4 extra marks)
- An argument about Priestley's purpose, treating characters as his constructs
- Clear understanding of structure: entrances, act endings, the twist and the final phone call
- Use of stage directions, lighting and timing as methods
- Context: 1912 setting vs 1945 audience, Priestley's socialism, class and gender
- Precise references to moments (short accurate quotations in the exam)
- Accurate SPaG (AO4: 4 marks)
| Level | Marks | What it looks like |
|---|---|---|
| Level 6 | 26–30 | A perceptive, original argument shaped by a clear overarching idea; quotations or references chosen with precision and woven into sentences; close, convincing analysis of how language, form and structure build meaning, with terminology used only where it sharpens the point; context folded into the argument rather than bolted on. |
| Level 5 | 21–25 | A considered, well-developed response; well-chosen references integrated into the argument; examines the writer's methods and their effects in some depth; context used thoughtfully to deepen interpretation. |
| Level 4 | 16–20 | A clear, sustained answer that keeps to the question; relevant references used effectively; methods clearly explained with appropriate terminology; context clearly understood and linked to the task. |
| Level 3 | 11–15 | Explains ideas with some development; references support points; some explanation of the writer's choices; some relevant understanding of context. |
| Level 2 | 6–10 | Relevant comments backed by some references; identifies some methods, mostly by naming them; some awareness of context or ideas. |
| Level 1 | 1–5 | Simple, mostly narrative comments; occasional references; a basic awareness that the writer has made choices; simple mention of context. |
| AO4 High | 4 | Spelling and punctuation consistently accurate; vocabulary and sentence structures used with confident control so meaning is always clear. |
| AO4 Intermediate | 2–3 | Generally accurate spelling and punctuation; a reasonable range of vocabulary and sentence types; meaning generally clear. |
| AO4 Threshold | 1 | Reasonable accuracy; a few errors that do not stop the reader following the argument; limited range of vocabulary and sentences. |
- Concept: political drama – we are all responsible; selfish individualism will be punished.
- Act 1: Birling's speech, dramatic irony (war, Titanic); doorbell interrupts.
- Inspector's method: one photograph, one line of inquiry – chain of blame; detective structure.
- Class/gender: Mrs Birling's hypocrisy; Eva never on stage; ordinary name.
- Inspector's final speech: one body; warning of suffering – 1945 audience; Goole/ghoul.
- Ending: older Birlings relapse, Sheila and Eric don't; final phone call – cyclical; Priestley's socialism, 1945.
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Priestley uses An Inspector Calls as a piece of political drama1: through one family's evening, he argues that we are all responsible for one another, and that a society built on selfish individualism will be punished. Writing in 1945 (the play reached the London stage in 1946) but setting the play in 1912, he exploits the gap between the two dates2 so that his audience, who had lived through two world wars, could see how disastrously wrong the Birlings' world view was, and choose to build something better.
Priestley establishes the opposing view first, through Mr Birling. In the opening act Birling delivers a confident speech to Gerald and Eric dismissing the idea of community and insisting that each man should mind his own interests and protect his family. Priestley undermines him through dramatic irony: in the same evening Birling predicts that there will be no war and praises the Titanic, due to sail the following week, as unsinkable. A 1945 audience would know he was wrong about everything, so they are positioned to distrust his views on responsibility as well. Structurally, the doorbell rings at the very moment Birling finishes3, as if the play itself is answering him: the Inspector arrives as the embodiment of the idea Birling has just mocked.
The Inspector's method dramatises responsibility as a chain. He interviews each character in turn, showing the photograph to one person at a time, so that the audience watches each link being added: Birling sacking Eva after she took part in a strike for higher wages; Sheila having her dismissed from Milwards out of jealousy; Gerald keeping her as his mistress and then ending the affair; Mrs Birling refusing her help from the charity committee she chairs; and finally Eric, who got her pregnant and stole money to support her. This episodic structure, borrowed from the detective story4, means no single person is solely to blame, yet each contributed. Priestley's point is that cruelty in society is rarely one dramatic act; it is a series of small, selfish decisions by people who never see the consequences.
Priestley also uses class and gender to show who is protected from responsibility. Mrs Birling, the play's most unrepentant character, insists the blame lies with the young man who fathered the child, not realising this is her own son. This climax of dramatic irony at the end of Act 2 exposes her hypocrisy: her charity work is about status, not compassion. Eva Smith never appears on stage5, which is itself significant; she is a voiceless working-class woman spoken about by the powerful. Her ordinary name suggests she stands for countless workers, a point the Inspector makes explicit in his final speech when he reminds the family that countless ordinary men and women like her have lives that are bound up with theirs.
That final speech is the play's moral climax. The Inspector moves from the particular to the universal, insisting that all people are bound together like the parts of a single body and warning that if people refuse to learn this lesson, they will learn it through suffering on a terrible scale. To an audience in 1945 this sounds like a prophecy of the two world wars, giving the Inspector an almost supernatural authority. His name, Goole, a homophone of ghoul, adds to this sense that he is not an ordinary policeman but a moral conscience or even a ghost.
Finally, Priestley uses the twist ending to test whether the characters, and the audience, have truly accepted responsibility. When Gerald discovers there is no Inspector Goole on the force and no recent suicide, Mr and Mrs Birling are relieved and return to their old complacency, even mocking the earlier events. Sheila and Eric, however, insist that nothing they did has changed. The final telephone call, announcing that a girl has just died and that an inspector is on his way, makes the cycle begin again. This cyclical structure suggests6 that those who refuse to learn will be forced to repeat the lesson. Priestley, a socialist who co-founded the Common Wealth Party in 1942, was writing as Britain voted in a Labour government and moved towards the welfare state, so the play becomes a challenge to his audience: will they behave like the older Birlings, or like their children?
- Retelling who did what to Eva Smith in order, without asking why Priestley structures it this way.
- Ignoring the 1912/1945 gap – the most important piece of context for this play.
- Treating the Inspector as just a policeman rather than Priestley's mouthpiece.
- Forgetting the twist ending and final phone call, which test the theme of responsibility.
- Writing general history about the Titanic or the war without linking to Birling's speech.