Q1 (8 marks) – how convincing is an interpretation of the threat from Mary, Queen of Scots?
This interpretation was written for this practice paper by a fictional historian. The events it refers to are real.
Interpretation A – from The Captive Queen, a book by the historian Margaret Lowell, published in 2009.
From the day she crossed the border in 1568, Mary was the most dangerous person in Elizabeth's kingdom. She did not need to raise an army herself: her very existence gave every discontented Catholic, at home and abroad, a queen-in-waiting to rally around. For nineteen years plot followed plot, each one built around placing Mary on the throne. Elizabeth's ministers understood this long before Elizabeth herself would admit it.
Question 1. How convincing is Interpretation A about the threat posed by Mary, Queen of Scots? Explain your answer using Interpretation A and your contextual knowledge. [8 marks]
- AO4: judge how convincing an interpretation is by testing what it says against your own knowledge
- AO1/AO2: use accurate knowledge of the period to support that judgement
- Picking out the specific claims the interpretation makes (Mary as a figurehead; continuous plotting; ministers ahead of Elizabeth)
- Testing each claim against precise, accurate knowledge – named plots, dates, people
- Showing where the interpretation is less convincing or overstates its case
- A clear overall judgement on HOW convincing it is
| Level | Marks | What it looks like |
|---|---|---|
| Level 4 | 7–8 | Complex: a sustained judgement on how convincing the interpretation is, testing several of its claims against precise knowledge and linking them. |
| Level 3 | 5–6 | Developed: tests more than one aspect of the interpretation against accurate, relevant knowledge. |
| Level 2 | 3–4 | Simple: tests one aspect of the interpretation against some knowledge. |
| Level 1 | 1–2 | Basic: general agreement or disagreement, or a summary of the interpretation, with little knowledge. |
- Identify 2–3 claims made in the interpretation
- Claim 1: Mary as a rallying point – test with the Northern Rebellion and the papal bull
- Claim 2: 'plot followed plot' – test with Ridolfi, Throckmorton, Babington
- Claim 3: ministers ahead of Elizabeth – test with Walsingham, the Bond of Association and Elizabeth's delay over the execution
- Limitation: was the threat as great as 'most dangerous' suggests?
- Overall judgement
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Interpretation A is largely convincing because its main claim, that Mary was dangerous as a figurehead rather than through her own actions1, is supported by the events after 1568. Mary had a strong claim to the English throne as the great-granddaughter of Henry VII2, and many Catholics regarded Elizabeth as illegitimate. Within a year of her arrival, the Revolt of the Northern Earls (1569)3 aimed to free Mary and marry her to the Duke of Norfolk, which shows how quickly discontented Catholics rallied around her. In 1570 the papal bull Regnans in Excelsis excommunicated Elizabeth and released Catholics from obedience to her, which made Mary an even more obvious alternative queen.
The claim that 'plot followed plot' is also convincing. The Ridolfi Plot (1571) planned a Spanish-backed invasion to put Mary on the throne; the Throckmorton Plot (1583) involved the Duke of Guise and the Spanish ambassador, Mendoza, who was expelled; and in the Babington Plot (1586) Mary herself wrote approving a plan to assassinate Elizabeth4. Every one of these plots was built around Mary, as the interpretation says.
The final claim, that the ministers saw the danger before Elizabeth, is convincing too. Walsingham's spy network uncovered Throckmorton and then trapped Mary by reading her coded letters during the Babington Plot. Elizabeth's councillors drew up the Bond of Association in 1584, and Parliament passed the Act for the Preservation of the Queen's Safety in 1585 so that anyone who benefited from a plot could be executed. Elizabeth, however, hesitated for months5 before signing Mary's death warrant and later claimed it had been sent without her consent, after Mary was executed at Fotheringhay in February 1587.
However, the interpretation is less convincing6 in calling Mary the 'most dangerous person' in the kingdom. None of the plots came close to success, Mary was kept under close guard throughout, and the more serious threat by the 1580s was Philip II of Spain, whose Armada sailed in 1588. Overall, Interpretation A is convincing about the kind of threat Mary posed7, as a focus for Catholic plots, even if it slightly exaggerates how close that threat came to toppling Elizabeth.
- Summarising Interpretation A instead of testing its claims against knowledge
- Writing about who wrote it and why – provenance is not the focus of this question
- Telling the story of every plot in detail without linking back to the interpretation
- Confusing the plots (e.g. Babington was 1586, not 1571) or claiming Mary was executed in 1586 – it was February 1587
- Giving no overall judgement on how convincing it is